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 Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. However, others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should be stopped. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

 解析

 本題的解題關鍵在于如何認識經濟發(fā)展與環(huán)境之間的關系:一些人認為經濟發(fā)展是唯一能阻止貧困和饑餓的方式然而另一些人認為經濟發(fā)展正是導致貧困和饑餓,所以人們應停止發(fā)展經濟。

 這篇寫作思路如下:

 1. 經濟發(fā)展帶給我們生活上的便捷以及物質生活上的提高,但經濟發(fā)展的確會帶來環(huán)境破壞;

 2.我們不能因此停止經濟發(fā)展,因為:1.只有發(fā)展經濟,社會才能進步,人類才能過上好的生活;2.經濟發(fā)展給環(huán)境帶來的破壞可以通過發(fā)達的科技削弱,甚至消除。

 3. 結論:我們不能放棄經濟發(fā)展,而是找到更好的方法去減輕經濟發(fā)展帶來的環(huán)境破壞。

 以下請看高分范文。

 As is known to all, the only solution to poverty and hunger is economic growth. However, many people raise objections to economic progress on the ground that it will cause huge damage to the environment.

 開頭鋪墊經濟發(fā)展對于消除貧困和饑餓的重要性,運用the only solution去突出經濟發(fā)展的重要性。接著提到經濟發(fā)展也會帶來相應的環(huán)境破壞,句中raise objection提出反對意見,on the ground 表示由于。由這兩句話作為文章開頭引出下文的討論部分。

 It is true, of course, that rapid economic growth often comes at the expense of the environment. This has happened again and again in the world, especially in the developing countries. The relentless urbanization process, for example, has destroyed numerous natural open spaces and animal habitat, and had the dull concrete buildings in their place. Meanwhile, it is not uncommon at all to see the rivers and streams around paper factories (or other manufacturing factories) are so polluted that the water is no longer drinkable.

 主體段第一段主要描述經濟發(fā)展對環(huán)境帶來的消極影響,采用總分結構敘述。主題句中at the expense of表示以…..為代價。Relentless表示無情的,修飾urbanization process(城市化進程)dull修飾水泥建筑以表達貶義。

 Yet this does not follow that we could do without economic growth. For one thing, only with fast economic development can people have the opportunities to enjoy a better material life, which is the first-tier need of all people at all times. Though this does not suggest that people's insatiable desire should always be met by developing economy, we can rather safely say that economic growth is often the primary concern for all people, especially those living in poverty and hunger. For another , though economic growth will necessarily bring negative effects on the environment, the effects can well be minimized or even eliminated. Covered with green trees and grasses, many big cities have now attracted birds and other animals back again. The rivers and streams around factories have become clean, too, as purifying technologies are put into use.

 主體段第二段以經濟發(fā)展的優(yōu)點作為段落核心觀點,引出經濟發(fā)展帶來的兩大好處,第一經濟發(fā)展是提升人們物質水平的重要原因,第二盡管經濟發(fā)展為經濟帶來負面影響但這些影響可以被減少甚至消除。本段結構以總分為主,for one thing, for another引導出兩個分論點。First-tier表示一級的修飾人們的需求,insatiable貪得無厭的修飾人們的渴望,minimize和eliminate兩個動詞的并列和purifying修飾科技的表達方法值得借鑒,。

 My opinion, then, is that economic growth is forever needed in spite of its potential risks to the environment. What we ought to do is try to find ways of reducing its effect on the environment, rather than give up economic development altogether.

 總結段重申自己的觀點,經濟發(fā)展會帶來環(huán)境的破壞但并不代表我們要組織環(huán)境的發(fā)展。In spite of表示盡管引導出讓步結構。

 總的來說篇作文屬于雙邊討論類題目,范文內容先肯定經濟發(fā)展確實帶來了一些壞處但中心論點以這些壞處同樣可以被經濟發(fā)展和發(fā)達的科技所解決,值得借鑒和積累的表達方式有如下:

 1.raise objection:提出反對意見

 2.on the ground:由于

 3.at the expense of:以…為代價

 4.relentless urbanization process:殘酷的城市化進程

 5.dull:無聊的

 6.first-tier need:首要需求

 7.insatiable desire:貪得無厭的需求

 8.minimize:最小化

 9.eliminate:消除

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廣州雅思英語學校成立于1999年,現任校長是有中國雅思“教父”之稱的中國社會科學院博士、中國雅思教育開拓者,資深留學教育專家萬昌明博士。廣州雅思英語學校是國內最早的專業(yè)雅思學校之一,也是英語IELTS考試中文“雅思”命名的首創(chuàng)者之一。十九年來, 廣州雅思英語學校秉承“教育以學生為本,以質量為先”辦學宗旨,堅持“知識、激情、勵志”的教學理念,發(fā)展成為華南乃至中國最大的雅思學校之一。