語法規(guī)范

1.不完整的句子

(1)Ifyoufindthatwritingishardisbecauseitishard.Oneofthehardestthingsthatpeopledo.

Ifyoufindthatwritingishardisbecauseitishard—oneofthehardestthingsthatpeopledo.

(2)Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworld.Agossipthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.

Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworld,agossipthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.

Stereotypesareakindofgossipabouttheworldthatmakesusprejudgepeoplebeforeweeverlayeyesonthem.

2.分詞短語作狀語的錯誤

Holdingherinhisarms,themoonhidbehindthecloud.

Assoonasthemoonhidbehindthecloud,heheldherinhisarms.

3.修飾詞錯位

(1)RomeoreceivedwordthatJulietwasdeadfromanothermessenger.

RomeoreceivedwordfromanothermessengerthatJulietwasdead.

(2)Afterleavingthestage,theaudience’sapplausecalledthemusiciansbackforanencore.

Afterthemusiciansleftthestage,theaudience’sapplausecalledthembackforanencore.

(3)Disruptiveintheclassroom,ateachermaybeexasperatedwithhyperactivechildren.

Disruptiveintheclassroom,hyperactivechildrenmayexasperateateacher.

4.串句

Unproductiveoruncooperativeworkerscanseriouslyharmanorganization,forthisreason,employersneedtohaveaccurateinformationaboutemployeeperformance,butwhenemployeeshavefullaccesstotheirownpersonnelfiles,co-workersandevensupervisorswilloftenfinditdifficulttogivefrankcriticismofunderachieversortoreporttroublemakers.

Unproductiveoruncooperativeworkerscanseriouslyharmanorganization;forthisreason,employersneedtohaveaccurateinformationaboutemployeeperformance.Butwhenemployeeshavefullaccesstotheirownpersonnelfiles,co-workersandevensupervisorswilloftenfinditdifficulttogivefrankcriticismofunderachieversortoreporttroublemakers.

5.時態(tài)錯誤

Theresearchersadmittedthattheyfalsifiedcrucialdatainthestudy.

Theresearchersadmittedthattheyhadfalsifiedcrucialdatainthestudy.

6.代詞錯誤

(1)Toooftenpeopleeitherkeeptheirfeelingstothemselvesortakeitouronothers.

Toooftenpeopleeitherkeeptheirfeelingstothemselvesortakethemouronothers.

(2)Eachgirlandboymustdotheirparttokeepthehomefiresburning.

Eachgirlandboymustdoherorhisparttokeepthehomefiresburning.

(3)Thiscollegehastheirownentrancerequirements.

Thiscollegehasitsownentrancerequirements.

(4)Ifonewishestoparticipateinthepoliticalprocess,youcanbeginbyvotingregularly.

Ifonewishestoparticipateinthepoliticalprocess,onecanbeginbyvotingregularly.

(5)Thefireinthelibrarywasfinallyputout.Forawhile,theythoughtanunhappyemployeemighthavestartedit.

Thefireinthelibrarywasfinallyputout.Forawhile,thelibrarystaffthoughtanunhappyemployeemighthavestartedit.

7.結(jié)構(gòu)混亂

BecauseHemingway’sstyleissimplemakeshiswritingaccessibletoallreaders.

BecauseHemingway’sstyleissimple,hiswritingisaccessibletoallreaders.

Hemingway’ssimplestylemakeshiswritingaccessibletoallreaders.