IELTSWritingTask2:independence(獨(dú)立)question

題目：

Somepeoplethinkthatinthemodernworldwearemoredependentoneachother,whileothersthinkthatpeoplehavebemoreindependent.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

翻譯：

Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherwearemoreorlessdependentonothersnowadays.Inmyview,modernlifeforcesustobemoreindependentthanpeoplewereinthepast.

Therearetwomainreasonswhyitcouldbearguedthatwearemoredependentoneachothernow.Firstly,lifeismoreplexanddifficult,especiallybecausethecostoflivinghasincreasedsodramatically.Forexample,youngadultstendtorelyontheirparentsforhelpwhenbuyingahouse.Propertypricesarehigherthanever,andwithouthelpitwouldbeimpossibleformanypeopletopayadepositandamortgage.Secondly,peopleseemtobemoreambitiousnowadays,andtheywantabetterqualityoflifefortheirfamilies.Thismeansthatbothparentsusuallyneedtoworkfull-time,andtheydependonsupportfromgrandparentsandbabysittersforchildcare.

However,Iwouldagreewiththosewhobelievethatpeoplearemoreindependentthesedays.Inmostcountries,familiesarebingsmallerandmoredispersed,whichmeansthatpeoplecannotcountonrelativesasmuchastheyusedto.Wealsohavemorefreedomtotravelandlivefarawayfromourhometowns.Forexample,manystudentschoosetostudyabroadinsteadofgoingtotheirlocaluniversity,andthisexperiencemakesthemmoreindependentastheylearntolivealone.Anotherfactorinthisgrowingindependenceistechnology,whichallowsustoworkaloneandfromanypartoftheworld.

Inconclusion,whiletherearesomereasonstobelievethatpeoplenowdependoneachothermore,myownviewisthatwearemoreindependentthanever.

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